All Comments on 'Turn About: A Cautionary Tale'

....didn't develop the tension/conflicts well leaving too many questions even for this content.

Stories about people asking for things then getting way way way more than they wanted should have a special warning or tag to them so that those who want them can find them and those who want nothing to do with them can more reliably stay the hell away.

I still very much enjoy the amount of detail you put into your writing and the degreee to which said detail makes the writing feel realistic, however this particular genre is not to my liking. I will probably go looking through more of your work and find something quite enjoyable.