by silkstockingslover
like your story and hope you keep these in more chapters
thanks jasmine
As usual, your stories grab me right away. Can't wait until next chapter.
SB
Love your stories and am truly hoping we get a update on all there scores as they play! Thank you for great story......as usual!
A five star start to what promises to be a continuing series of the usual well written stories fron this prolific writer,
The anonymous commentator is dead wrong about the author's gender but he's right that this story can certainly be enjoyed by male readers.
Another great story from the sapphic queen Silkstockingslover! voted, faved, and waiting for more!
Love you stories, love the originality of them all and cannot wait for the series to be continued
Another great story Jasmine, another great story line that will leave all your fans on edge waiting for the follow ups.....but then you are always a bit of a tease......
I knew what was going to happen just from the title. I don't want every MILF to get their prize right away and exactly how they wanted it. I would love for some surprises to enter the MILFs plans. For example, if one of the potential girls ended up being a transsexual or while the MILF and her teen were in middle eating each other out the teen's very large and very dominant boyfriend comes walking in on them. After all it's what the character didn't expect that brings them to submission and climax. The same is for me, the reader. Thank you for reading my two cents, and keep writing the best stories.
Respectfully,
DeepSeaJake
Another great story, write I think by a great pussy lover. I love you stories and my little slut to, so I give a five star. She’s felt so slutty when I said her than one day I’ll forced her to be on her knees between female legs and have to lick wet pussy.
Great story. I'd love to see how the contest plays out. Hopefully it becomes a real contest and we get to hear of more than one conquest by each milf. Also maybe a brief backstory on how the moms becames dommes to their own daughters. Except the one who is a sub. Which leaves an interesting dynamic. If one of the domme mothers wins, how does the domme daughter fall into line, and does her mother come with the package? And if the sub mother wins, does she become a sub to all the daughters? Oh, and does each mother have only one daughter or do some have more than one? Very interesting premise, and can't wait to keep reading further adventures.
Can't wait to see what happens. Love it, wish I could meet people like that
Why your stories are rated so highly. The dialogue is boring and cliched, as are the situations.
Once again a hot and erotic story. Ready for the next chapters to see how the others do.
I will die trying.
the story line was great but it had so much more potential to be a excellent 5 or 7 chapter story
I agree with the previous comment, this story has the potential, as developed thus far, to be extended to at least seven more chapters, maybe more. Nice build-up for the ongoing sex act but did leave us reader dangling as previously mentioned.
Add more chapters, PLEASE!!!!!
As usual, I loved this story, but I hope you make the next story more of a true conquest. A little suspense as to the outcome would be really great!
OMG I so need to shop at your store, the experience fulfilled some of my naughty young fantasies. I found myself really into the Amy character, but perhaps a more flirtatious, curious, and willing subject. Do you sell bathing suits? :-)
Beth in California... xxx ooo
Just like the MILF in the story, I love pantyhose on all women, regardless of age! Great story! Can't wait to read the sequel! Hopefully, you'll make it a series.
I love this genre - lesbian seduction of straight girls - Stockings & nylons are icing on the cake. I look forward to reading many seductions that will hopefully come through this series.
The interaction between the characters is unrealistic. It's like watching people play chess against themselves each having already decided which side would win from the outset. There's no rationalizing going on, it's just a power fantasy.
As usual I love the story and look forward to reading the other 7 parts you have already posted. I love that you enjoy pretty women with great legs in stockings as much as I do.
Love all of your stories. Cannot wait until you continue this one as she brings a friend to be seduced. Looking forward to it.!!!!
You will all recall those store clothing racks that are large circles about ten feet in diameter. At a major discount store there was always a back-up at the changing room for trying on garments. The women began getting miffed at the long waiting times for using the changing rooms and started taking garments into the center of the racks to try on. This of course drew the attention of all the males in the store. Now I stop in the store even without my wife just to see what is on display. I never knew so many women do not wear underwear, but I appreciate them for it.
Your, without a doubt, the most talented author on literotica for a reason. Thanks.
Another excellent story but I confess to not understanding a woman enjoying using a strap-on, unless it's double-ended. Is it the joy of giving, like eating pussy?
... a little predictable. Lovely erotic writing as expected from you but it didn't quite make it for me. Veronica was too aggressive IMO. Still 5 stars.
A couple of name mistakes, (better punish those who did the editing), but overall a very enjoyable story
Love, your natural abilities as a writer. Just seeing your name melts my butter. I must admit, it’s been a while since I went looking for your work on my own, but this story reminded me that your one of the most inventive talents at submissive, exhibitions, lesbian sex. My first year in college I served as the my sorority’s “pass-around”. You’ve done a great deal of writing about about teachers and their students; so it’s deliciously perverted that I become a teacher at a all girls religious school. Just want to let you know your talents always leave me wet and exhausted. Love, being used by you.
Decent but nothing amazing. Amy went along with it far more easily than one would expect. And then there is always the men bashing. As if girl to girl cant have its own merit without that.
578. Always love the girl on girl even if there is a lot of forcing in the submissive relationship. I suspect this series will showcase much of that. But why trash the males? That could be omitted and the story remains hot.