by JimBob44
In Austin we have a place called Casey's New Orleans snowballs. Just a little shack but man they're best for shaved ice.
Thanks for this story, I really enjoyed it.
This was a nice change of pace. I really enjoyed that this story is about the art of seduction. In many of your stories, characters just tend to hop in the sack out of sheer animal attraction. Great job, JB.
Lloyd M. Bentsen High School cracked me more than it should have. Mighty fine Tutelage. Most fellas could use some.
interesting and fun story, a bit heavy on the accent for my taste (not being a US citizen) but still nice
JimBob continues to deliver new stories that explore different personalities with his characters. The meat of all his work revolves around fake people that could be any one of us. This is what I'd always aspired to (not very successfully I might add) the few that I've put out. This author has perfected his craft to the point where I look forward to the next JB story. Thanks so much for sharing with us.
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Though it's nice to see the tutee following the instructions to the 'tee,' he needs to come up with some variations.
After all these are just guidelines.
LOL, "I'm a virgin, you'll have to show me". Good I wish i wasn't so clueless at that age. Wonderful first time story. Five stars.
Terrific as always! Truly consistent writer that entertains the reader! I love the attitude of writing what you want to write - well said!
Please do keep writing and I will keep reading!
#1; Is there going to be a sequel to this story? Interesting cliffhanger, you have there. #2, There are places in your story that could stand to use a verb in the sentence. The lack of a verb in those sentences stops this from being a 5 star story.