All Comments on 'Twelve Days of Hrive 'Isia Ch. 06'

A charming tale, charmingly told. Five stars.

Methinks you could benefit from an editor who could pick up on the occasional malapropism and grammatical error, but that aside this was a delightful tale and I look forward to more in the same vein.

I enjoyed reading this story very much, and look forward to any other adventures set in this world! Many thanks for posting it! :)