All Comments on 'Twelve Gates Ch. 11'

How can someone trust someone if they don't tell them what they want them to do for them and also it is a bit soon for a tattoo, you really have to know someone before thinking about it as that is a permanent thing

Love the story and love them both, i don't want it to end but at the same time looking forward to the next chapter

You really are doing an excellent job drawing out the tension. I'm wondering - what is the purpose of the gates? What happens after? What ulterior motive is there? Who is Robert really? My crazy slasher music is still playing in the background.

Also - the little bit of their conversation that begins with "Nah. That idea might cross the line between 'Master' and 'egomaniac'." Loved it! Fantastic exchange.

Another amazing chapter keep up the great work and please please don't make me wait to long for the next chapter I am hooked on this story

Individually, each chapter has been lovely. Collectively, they continue to build on themselves, creating an energy that for me, a reader, is electric. Some chapters a little lighter, some a little darker (this one was lighter...). Always waiting eagerly for the next, but take your time, we can wait.

I'll say it again.. what an amazing story!! So so good.

I'm very very curious where this all is going to end up but at the same time, I don't want it to end too fast either.

Thank you and 5 more stars from me.

Thank you. This story just keeps getting better and better. I love your characters and wait with baited breath for the next chapter.