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Paul4playPaul4playabout 3 years ago

Excellent!

More, please....many directions for this story to evolve....

wgaiuswgaiusabout 3 years ago

I'm eager for the next installment. I like your writing style and pacing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Stick to the same tense.

You started out in past tense then turned the story to present tense.

Stick to the tense you start with.

wish_thinkerwish_thinkerabout 1 year ago

What? Is that the end?

wish_thinkerwish_thinkerabout 1 year ago

Sorry, now I see more. Love it!

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