All Comments on 'Twenty Years to Life Ch. 04'

by Evil Alpaca

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Cromm CrauchCromm Crauchover 18 years ago
Fantastic

Your stories just keep getting better and better no matter how many time I read them. Keep it up they are entertaining and HOT and not just the sex but the characters too.

~Cromm~

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago

Yeah, i'm a lesbian.. Oh, yeah, me and my girlfriend just looove fucking men. - Yeah, she's a lesbian too!

...No. Give me a break. You shouldn't've called her gay in the beginning and wasted my fucking time. 0/100.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
Conflicted

Evil I love how you are an excellent storycrafter, But this chapter was disturbing to read. I keep reading just because you wrote it. I know I must have very vanilla tastes, but I felt I was reading a NONCONCENT/RELUCTANCE story and I avoid the rough ones. This IMHO was too rough.

gr3ywindgr3ywindover 9 years ago
yeah men are just lesbian sex tools...

Wtf really? This started out as such a sweet story, amazing characters, deep backgrounds and now you've just shat all over it degrading her to a cum dumpster who gets BETTER orgasms with random men than the woman she claims to love. I expected better from you. Such a damn shame that this was the last story I had left from you and it's shit. Well written shit but shit noneheless. 1/5.

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 8 years ago
Love it

I so much loved reading your story

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

EvilAlpaca its your story, your fantasyland, your imagination, your talent st first that makes this tale happen ..... And yes a sub dom couple is hard work and foremost trust, and so its a thinn line in outing trusting sharing playing and much more ...... But as always worth more then 5 stars

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