by JayLikestoRead
What going on here? The prior part was Parts 6 and 7. Did you forget that you already had a Part 7 or were you planning a Part 7a and a Part 7b and you forgot to add the a and b to the right parts. Just curious is all.
Guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree in this family, just don't make it an parents-kids kinda orgy. Keep them apart and if the parents want to do it with their siblings go for it, just leave the sis/bro couple pure. Love the whole pregnancy thing going on, nice streamlined story from previous chapter, now all I want to see is how they go about presenting themselves in public, should be fun to read.
5*
P.S. Might want to fix the chapter numbering though, it's a bit confusing unless this was meant to go before the intermediate epilogue from previous chapter.
If you are going to write about other family members and not finish it out with what happens when they become part of the story I would prefer that it not be mentioned than mention them and than end the story and leave us hanging what is?
It's been over 12 months since this chapter appeared, just don't say you're going to be like so many other authors on here and leave a story unfinished ?
Please, finish it properly !
Rapier
Please please say you’re going to keep add to this am I right?
The stuff with the parents was unnecessary are distracting. More about the main characters would have been appreciated. It was a short chapter.
please don't add mom and dad to their sex life. keep bro and sis exclusive to each other. bro/sis love is the purest form of love ever.
Please continue this story, would love to find out if they tell their parents about the true nature of their true rlationship. And their life together before and after the baby.