by DreamOn
fantastic story!! very well done, nicely written, quite enjoyable!
Excellent and unique set-up led to a satisfying culmination. It demands the suggested follow-up!
Heya, just got round to reading your story (had pc problems) I like... I think the 'game' brought it off.. Well anyways, buzz me later.
Shez
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good story would like to read what happens next with Gabriella, Marco, Jenny and Jenny's husband