Your imagination is excellent and your premise, sound. Your writing, though, can't yet fully bring it to life. Keep working it! I respect the effort you're putting into this. Keep growing, keep trying. Appreciate you.
Born and raised in Portsmouth, VA, born January 26th, active duty vet, Just trying to get my writing career off the ground, and most of all, appease and tease. Here's some of my catalog below: https://www.amazon.com/kindle-vella/story/B0CPYMMLSK https://www.amazon.com/kind...