All Comments on 'Two Fantasies Become One Reality'

OMG....I loved that story. Had me picturing all sorts of things. Can't wait to read the other ones now....lol

VERY WELL WRITTEN, I really enjoy your style of writing. I'd love to see Chapter III written where Jessica brings her friend that got her the job, into the picture. After ALL his daughter is 21... I'm sure if Daddy had thought about his daughters friends back when she would sleep over, that he also thought about his own.. MMC

It's a hot story. Keep it up

same here man....I thought I was seeing

one movie to another and then back to

the other movie. it's a combination of

lust with a cast of freaky characters..

you're a gifted writer.

Magnificent....each word held my attention. Have re-read it three time, your descriptions and passages are incredible.

Don't disappoint us...create a Part II...please

...you may as well do it with a hot and willing young virgin.

It's too much to think that a virgin can/will fuck like an experienced lover -- both as to WHAT she is eager to do and her EAGERness to do it. Admittedly, that is part of what made the story hot, and, while I expect some suspension of (dis)belief in Literotica fantasy stories, this was too much. This "too muchness" was already percolating in my mind as I read, but it pushed way past the limit for a virgin when she fingered his anus.

In short, too much too fast -- for a virgin.

Jessi's forwardness and wanton capability would have been perfectly suited for a college coed experienced with sex for the last three years, and now wanting to experience a mature guy.

Next, it was not enough.

As I was reading, I kept wondering about his wife. His new lover seems to have taken over his thinking. Why does he masturbate instead of satisfying his horniness with his wife? How does this encounter with Jessi effect his relationship with his wife -- especially sexually? Does wifey find out? -- If not, at least a statement telling us.

Although ending it shortly, as the author did, has its merits, an alternate ending might have told how the affair progressed, including did his daughter find out? and, did other(s) of his daughter's friends follow?

It was not enough to satisfy all our/my curiosity -- but maybe it does not need to.

Nevertheless, it is told well, and, is about a subject I like, namely, daughter's friend (or young enough to be) wanting him (eagerly, like Jessi, is a plus) with him showing her what pleasures can come from sex, and receiving back the same.

So gave it 🌟🌟🌟🌟.

Thanks for an interesting read.

Paul in Oklahoma