All Comments on 'Two Firsts for Jill'

For little bakeboss, how romantic. If this is what your sex life was like no wonder you went gay.

While this is not a great story,being let down by a weak ending,it is good and does not deserve the remarks made by anonymous.

This is a really well written piece. The communication between husband and wife is obviously close to home, and was very touching. If anything the last part of the story felt a little rushed. Please write more.

Sharon....Sharon....

You can go to a doc and get that pussy tightened, but you are probably already too enamored of doing multiples.

I loved the story but you brought it to a close too rapidly. It needed more specific visual action towards the end. Love to read about your adventures with Sharon.