All Comments on 'Two For Tizzy'

JPB, you are a better writer than this. You know this. We, your readers, know this. You can do better than this. You have done better than this. Just because you are a prolific writer does not mean you have to publish every last bit of drivel you write (otherwise you end up like Stephen King or Michael Crichton!).

The premise behind the story is semi-interesting, but you don't take it anywhere, and the characters are not even 1 dimensional. Wife confusing her husbands long lost twin, (done to death on Lit), then being caught- but we have no emotional payout; just a dick on her cheek as the hubby grins. Why? Why is he grinning? He hates his family (otherwise he would visit them more often), so why?

hi.

a shining example of a classical air head story.

nice to see you can make a decent air head story work in 1/3rd the normal space they normally take.

but air head story's are wasting your great talent. though i have to say fun to read if you what a good laugh. which is why i'll give it 4 stars.

I have read better shit in bathroom stalls at the the local Dennys

But thanks for trying.

Not your best JPB, thanks for keeping it short. We read anything you write because it is you so, sorry you didn't feel that electric excitement that usually gets your pen to driving our thirst for more of your banter.

Hope you feel better tomorrow!!

Thanks!

JPB,

snuck one in on us eh!

Thanks for sharing on Lit.

x

A good storyline and as always; well written.

Thanks

I haven't read this brand of story. It's too short and the characters lack development. We have no idea how her growing up with that level of sexual abuse changed her, and the men are a pair of cocks.

I give it a two, which is well below what I normally give your stories.

It's obviously all just a set up and a goofy story. Sounds like she got a twofer.

Been Crapped !!!!! By Bob!!!!!!!!!! This was a good one Bob.

While young, it most certainly can be called abuse. BUT, in my lifetime I have learned those abused as youngsters grow up to be absolute wild partners when it comes to sex...

After all, who wants to be married to a slut?

DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE DIRE I GIVE UP READING ANY MORE OF YOUR PATHETIC SHITE STORIES YOU BRAINLESS MORON...HAVE NOT YET ONE THAT IS WORTH TIME WASTED READING IT....

Could happen, has to people I know. Not the sex mix up but in other conditions.

No wonder this guy is the most popular author in LW.

This is.no gem, rather it's more of the mud you dig through to find that.gem.

Guess I can't see sharing my wife with my brother, even if he was my twin.

Great story! One of your best, JPB.