All Comments on 'Two Guys, a Girl, and a Threesome'

You did great, I’m aroused and rubbing one out .

Very arousing and not too bi for this straight dude. I enjoyed it.

As a bi guy I loved your story.

I’d say you’ve got the male pov down. Thanks for a great story. 5⭐️

You are more than just 'comfortable' with writing from a male pov, IsabellaEmily. This was an excellent example of how to get your female readers wet. I loved every single bit of this - from the voyerism, through the threesome and right down to Matt and Erica sucking Brad's cock. Very hot indeed! Your story gets 5 stars from me.

As others have stated, IsebellaEmily, you have done a first class job of describing what is males feel in the build up and throes of orgasm. Well done.

Whilst bi stories would not be me go to choice, this was done in such a way that it was not off-putting to this hetro reader, and made the three way connection just perfect for them

Amazing!! Very hot. Agree with vikingboys comment.

Loved this, particularly the slow build-up through listening, watching, touching, and finally joining. And as for the M-M contact you warned about, no problem at all for me. I still subscribe to the sixties ,mantra: "If it feels good, do it." As a heteroflexible guy, I'm always turned on by another naked body, and the type of plumbing it has doesn't matter that much. Five stars for this?

Well written, and anytime someone writes about two men fucking a women's cunt at the same time I'm all in. Been there and done that a number of times and there is nothing as intense as feeling another cock sliding back and forth on mine while snuggled in a warm wet cunt. Love the feeling of a man's warm cum bathing my dick as it floods her pussy.

Gawd the sprinkle of bi guy stuff was so so sexy

Absolutely excellent. That little bit of MM contact was so sexy - it's something too many authors leave out. X

Sweet and sexy story about good friends sharing their bodies, their orgasms and good times. Thanks!

One note sounded a bit off: I've double-fucked my wife's pussy with a good friend a number of times, and never has one of us two men gone off that the other didn't go off almost simultaneously. This is the first time I've read of a dvp where one man orgasmed while the other pulled out without cumming.

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My kind of story, absolutely. I believe that Brad would have known that they were swingers before the road trip though.

Erica sounded totally hot. That Matt was bisexual didn't bother me a bit.

I've fantasized double vaginal in my wife and feeling a guy's cock rubbing up against mine.

That'd be so very erotic. I wish reality was like these stories.....

5 star story for sure....

I loved this story, thank you so much for posting it. I know I'll come back to it many times.

Very erotic!!!!!!!!!!!