by StoryTeller07
I messed up with the request to Literotica, and the chapter was deleted. It's now back with better editing.
Now he's caught between a rock and a hard spot. What does he do now? He has two horny "Older Women" in love with him. Maybe He needs to get them together. Perhaps his Mother catches them and wants a piece of the action. There are so many ways you could go with this. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Posted in your previous deleted ones. Eagerly waiting for the next one. Don't make us wait a longer... Love the difference in the two and his way of handling each of them.
He talks to Adele about meeting in the car, then is having sex with SYLVIA. I think the name got changed somewhere. Wasn't enough to stop reading though. But slightly confusing
In the last chapter (2) he had sex with Sylvia in her car. What he was thinking about, in chapter 3, was that he gave her Adele's wet panties to put on. A bit nasty, but an 18 year old would find it funny. Is that where you thought the confusion came in?
I'm very much enjoying how these relationships are developing, and would love to know what happens next.
One note: I think that you got the wrong name about 3/4 of the way down page 1 of ch. 3 -- it says that Adele was waiting for him, but then he's telling Sylvia to say she loves him. Because the scenes before and after are both with Adele, I think it's supposed to be Sylvia, but having that error makes it confusing because the reader thinks they're starting the conversation set up in the immediately preceding scene, then gets something entirely different.
AS everyone else has said please continue this. There are so many possibilities without mentioning his father doing in somehow. He could have recognised them at the house and not let on while planning what to do next. Please more.