All Comments on 'Two's Company, Three's a Party Ch. 01'

by Jay142

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Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegler6 months ago

Amazing tale man. Five stars. Well written. A dream come true! Cheers 🥂

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Stunning 😍😍😍😍

AnnalovesitAnnalovesit6 months ago

Excellent, obviously it's Anns turn next!

Loved it

ronibarretronibarret6 months ago

An excellent writing of a common fantasy for us guys. Well done!

dick_hardendick_harden6 months ago

Great little fantasy, Jay. It was a bit clunky at the start but once you got into it, it flowed along nicely. Glad to see this is just Ch 01, so looking forward to more! Thanks.

wxt55ukwxt55uk6 months ago

I always enjoy your writing Jay142, thank you for sharing it with us.

PappasleazePappasleaze5 months ago

This was a great story. every mans dream. The descriptions of what was happening was very well written. I can/t wait for chapter 2 I wonder if Ann will get some of Steve or will Sharon come back for round two (my preference) 5 stars

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