by Jay142
Great little fantasy, Jay. It was a bit clunky at the start but once you got into it, it flowed along nicely. Glad to see this is just Ch 01, so looking forward to more! Thanks.
This was a great story. every mans dream. The descriptions of what was happening was very well written. I can/t wait for chapter 2 I wonder if Ann will get some of Steve or will Sharon come back for round two (my preference) 5 stars