All Comments on 'Tyler Becomes My Cocksucker Ch. 01'

Loved you calling him such slutty things! That really set me off.

The story is off to a good start. A little proofreading could add to the overall vibe . One paragraph says he doesn't have on underwear and the one that follows says:

"His big hand cupped my cock and balls as he pulled them out of my sweatpants and underwear."

I was in my mid-twenties, and was a confirmed cocksucker, the first time someone called me names they must have thought were derogatory and humiliating. Instead of being insulted being called queer, cocksucker and fag only served to arouse me, and I began encouraging men to call me names and treat me like a slut.

Sucking a big cock is sooooo good. It’s even better feeling in my ass while being fucked

I really enjoyed Tyler's enjoyment at being called names. Definitely made me indetify with the character. Look forward to more if Tyler's cocksucking adventures

Please write more!

I am a cocksucker and love when they call me their cocksucker and act dominant to me. I don't want anal but I love sucking cock and swallowing his cum. I don't care as much about size as I do the amount of his load. I love a man that fills my mouth with a big load of his tasty cum. Please write more about Tyler sucking your cock.

I loved your story and as a devoted cock sucker, I can't wait to read chapter ll.

This was so fucking hot. I wanna suck cock like that.

Idk if there’s a way for you to edit this chapter, but when our narrator describes he’s not wearing underwear and then says that Tyler pulls the narrator’s pants and underpants down, it jars me a little. Maybe do a quick edit to get rid off the inconsistency?

Great story. I loved the name calling. It felt so natural color and real. I love being called names like that when I'm sucking cock or being fucked.

What would have been even better is if Ryan DENIED Tyler an orgasm. After Ryan cums with that big dick he would then grab Tyler's wrists and prevent him from touching his dick anymore.

You've covered your bases. Basic character development and description, plot, grammar. This is delicious and very well written, so far.

God I wish I was Tyler lol. Great story.

If all guys sucked their friends dick this world would be a happier place IMHO.

Keep writing. I want to hear about his heels in the air and his booty getting stretched and plunged.

Thx in advance.

God and Jesus both sucked each others cock and swallowed as well.

Tyler is a lucky boy! Would love to take his place! Loved when you called him cocksucker, etc. want that to happen to me! Never swallowed but would love for you to tell me to! like? swallow it faggot!

I am a bottom but do not like the humiliation some of the guys pile on you while in the act of fucking your face or your ass. Sorry. I have a friend and being with him is very romantic and loving.

Well done! You've got most of us wishing we were Tyler.

Nice story, Myself I’ve never been into the verbal abuse when I’m sucking a guys cock or letting him fuck my tight ass, but sometimes when really horny I kinda do like to her things like “You like sucking my cock” or

“God you’ve got a tight ass”.

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After word got out in the neighborhood that I have a large cock, a gay nephew of my neighbor wanted to play with, touch and suck me off! He said he'd never seen a cock that large!

I'm so turned on after reading it. I know that I'm close to shooting a load. I just love having a big cock in my mouth and listening to all the comments from the guy whose cock I'm sucking. I also like it when other guys are present and watching what I'm doing. Swallowing a load of white gold is just over the top. I can't get enough....

Loved it! I get so horny for cock!