All Comments on 'Un-Valentines Party Games'
by m_storyman_x
- 11 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoIs there any way I can give this a "6"??
And ... it cries for a sequel!!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoIt was beautiful Hot & Sexy story. Hope to read more like this
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI completely agree with the previous comment--where's the sequel!?! :)
EesomeBeastieabout 13 years agoTotally unbelievable, but what the heck - it's a fantasy and a very well executed one! You managed to write several consecutive sex scenes without it getting repetitive at all, which orgy stories are prone to, so well done for that too. Only a handful of spelling and grammer oopses let it down slightly.
LUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years agoWhat a fantastic story and expertly written, well done. I'm excited to see what else you have done. Good luck in the contest you deserve to do well.
rightbankover 9 years agoless than mature, very inexperienced, but wishful, 17 year old boy virgin
btw, so much for the rules set down by the long distance couple. hubby just broke all of them, big time.
Goodhueabout 8 years ago-HOT,sexy story! What guy wouldn't love to be Mike,playing games with all those sexy women! ~ Would hope there's a sequel in the future!
lwiltonabout 6 years agoAlways fun spending the night with good friends.
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