All Comments on 'Unbelievable Pt. 07'

i really like the ending of this chapter and i cant wait to see what happens next. i had a feeling someone was gonna get prego but was not expecting it to be her. love it keep up the good work

I'm not ashamed to say that at times I cried while reading this story. Can't wait for the next chapter

I’ve been waiting for this forever I’m not disappointed such a good read

thanks for the chapter, waiting for the next ones, but I don't like the idea of sharing it with his family, but I think it will happen because everyone shares

Thank you for the warning about the tears. I made it to page 3 before they came. Excellent storytelling! 5 stars as usual. Thank you for sharing your writing.

F*CK YOU

You make me cry, laugh, cry some more. then you end this chapter like that!?!

I love it!!! you did warn me and I believed you. This has been and still is one of my favorite stories. You are a master Sir, Thank you for sharing.

Oh my god, he didn't.

Y do you do this to me. I can't keep waiting.

Loved it.

Cheers

Ash

Well, you promised tears and delivered. Was waiting for the next installment of this series and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for the enjoyable read.

Enough said, on to the next chapter. I love it.

Another great installment. Definitely emotional but fun still. Really looking forward to the next one.

Keep them coming and thanks for your hard work.

Yes!! Finalt we got Janus back into the mix, I think she is his soulmate after he is trying to let go of Julia, and their child might help John to move on with his life, when he can focus on Janus and his child, how it’s going to work with the rest of his family I don’t know, but I’m really looking forward to finding out

How much would we all have to pay you to get next chapter out for this in a timely fashion?

Please don’t let us wait for to long for the next chapter I love this story and most of your others too Please keep it coming You have a lot of great stories

I new janus was pregnant i read it in chapter 4 or 5 but like way you told the hole family at ocne. I can not wait for the next chapter of this stroy.

Great chapter we loved it. Hopefully the family won't get too bent out of shape for her reveal. Can't wait to see what's next and how it goes.

I liked it. The only part I wasn’t feeling was the pretend rape part near the beginning. That part soured the rest of the story which is why I’d give this part a 4.

5 STARS. JANUS IS GOING TO HAVE A BABY GIRL OF COURSE AND GUESS WHAT THEY WILL NAME IT? MAYBE JULIA?

I am loving how this is coming along. I also love the way you left this cliff hanger at the end. Great job. 5 Stars here as well.

Enjoyed the new story! What can I say, that hasn't already been said! You have so many open stories I can't wait for the next one!

Thank you!

Jneric

This is a great series. Out of the 7 chapters so far the only partni didn't catr for was the families reaction to john when they returned from the visit from the hospital qhere they found the id bracelet

I was getting sad because I thought the story was about to end(it was wrapping itself up nicely), now i'm happy it's not and mad about the cliff-hanger. Emotional rollercoster

just can't wait for next chapter

my only worry is Annie's reaction.

You are the ONLY author I read, I think your stories are ALL fuckin amazing. I reread your stories ONLY. Keep up the great work and keep all your stories coming.

Loved this story please let us know how it turns out!! I have read a lot of stories only to have them me let down the way an author would just stop his story with out an ending.

Thank You For Your Efforts

Great Story. Loved it. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Hope I don’t have to wait to long.

Second read through and still amazing to read even if it's an emotional read.

I hope to read the next chapter soon.

I had to stop myself many times This is some story. I am some kinda worked up cuz of it

I can't believe how invested in this I find myself.

So, so happy I've found your work.

Please, keep it going. I'm totally enjoying every aspect of it. Yes, the sexual descriptions are very detailed.

But the whole of the story is so captivating.

What a bunch of absolute shits Johnny’s family are. All they want is his huge cock. His mother is the most needy bitch of them all. And, Annie, all those promises l’ll never hurt you or leave you. What bullshit, she happily pimps him to Katherine, Ruth and Wanda, even Janus as well..

The mother jumps Johnny’s bones and Annie rushes off to fuck Dad!!!!!

What lowlife bitch.

All the family except for Johnny are lowlife whores only interested in their own gratification l have never read about such selfish ppl before.

None of them deserve the boy, and does not deserve any of them.

In a way, I wish he would tell ALL to fuck off and go and live in a monogamous relationship with the woman who I think truly loves him, Janus

Still, the tale has me in, 4/5

I mean what a revelation

Jonh/Johnny has finally discovered the second woman in his life who truly loves him for himself, as he is (Julia was the first woman regardless of age). The female members of this family are only interested in John/Johny's sexual equipment/ability. They want him the way he was. They seem unable to accept him the way he is. This series is rated 5 stars because of the author's ability to write; use the English lanuage; has done some research on psychiatric disorders; developed the characters in both depth and breath; and finally, has logically developed the plots and subplots.

Still no explanation on how they started sharing in the family. Glad they didn't describe Annie and Brandan because I still don't understand this family. They are just as fucked in the head as he is in a different way.

Annie declares her love for her “boyfriend”, then fucks her father… what a messed up bunch. Mom is just plain creepy, and the brothers are both cucks. Ruth and Wanda are size queens that will cheat on their men every chance they get. The crazy guy is the most sane person in the family…

There is actually a good story arc hidden away in the midst of all the needless, meaningless manipulation of John for their own benefit.

I agree with some of the other comments posted how can the sister claim to love him when the first chance she gets she fucks her dad without even giving him a seconds thought it's literally like she's playing him for a fool that's not what being in love with someone is that's not what they do I wish the writer would explain that too us readers I have tried to at from every which direction to see it from another point of view but now matter how much I do how hard I try it comes back the same way she's just using trying cuck him like she's doesn't love him never has another thing it seems every one involved is just using him cause he has a big dick just my opinion of course but I really would like the writer to explain how what the sister does in this is being in love with her brother

Yeah, intergenerational incest turns me off.