All Comments on 'Unbroken Ch. 04'

Thats a lot to take in and deal with but I have faith ,you can't help but love Aidan and he is the right man for the job ,when you find yourself in a volatile situation, you need a clear head and it's always your choice how you deal with it, so I have faith in him.Love is powerful.

am in love with this story... next please!

Looking forward for the next chapter. Hope there will be some sex scene in the next one. Thnx dear

thanks for posting again bu today am just dumbstruck

vanalas u can write!!!!!!!..All the scenes were mwaaaah

guys???is luis's mother that good?? i wonder,she's gentle and indeed the story is mwaaah.I love her for loyalty

yes..Let Aid start it but noway he is to allow the prince have his body so soon,let him yearn

ofcourse i want the prince to change to an extent whr

he speaks to Aid sweetly,let him try to make atalk to Aid

Do u kno acow on heat???thats how i want the prince to yearn..let him also be nyc and try to get Aid

but above all this let them have intensive love than that of the leading S.F.L and the unforgottable F.Y,D-L complex

But do u kno what bothers me?

posting again wil be next wednesday leaving us helpless and yearning,ma

y u enjoy hurting us

but its ur crime to be abest writer,so plz at once put us ur budget

am in lock now,so atleast tomoro lets hmmmm yeah

hahahahaha,dont forget the shower scene,Luis needs toturing heheh

needs to see Aid n*k**d

For i wana see the prince change

oh the theme song is"never say by justin bieber"

since,these guys are fighting not wanting defeat

Luis when angry becomes ababy,hahahahaha

immagine his face wen Aidan annoyed him

How many times does Luis have to state the same arguments? We get it; you don't have to beat us up over and over with the same point. Beyond annoying. I lost interest and stopped reading because it was so repetitive. Move the story forward with action.

anon plz,dont annoy us,these ar his plans so advise or dont comment

people dont just be selfish,think about the author at times,how he'l feel with that comment

fine u're ladvising but use agentle tone okay????

Is this the King that killed his family? When will those events unfold? When we we understand Aiden’s powers? Also, when’s his makeover coming?

Lastly, I feel like Aiden needs an ally. Everyone one is catering to the Prince (minus the King) and that’s part of his problem. He should not have to teach an adult child to be reasonable, that was the Queens job.

I left this site for the ungrateful comments, I return and it has got worst, if you have an idea for a book write one. These writers go out of their way to write books they put on here for free, I apologise to the writer for not voting, I get so into a great story I forget. I am sure you would not mind some constructive criticism, but some of the comments from all your books are insulting. Some of these haters, I am guessing, are wanna be writers.

This is one of the best stories on this site. I just love it and I want more. Please.....vanalas please post more.

Haters will always be there vanalas. Just like one of the anons said, they are probably wanna be writers. Keep up the good work. Hooray to you

But like someone pointed out repeating the same argument is alot