All Comments on 'Uncle Dicky-Do'

Proofread! There are so many spelling and grammatical errors in this story that it is hard to read. Also, the tense of the narrative keeps changing, which is also quite distracting.

Both of your stories are too poorly written to read. Could not get past the first couple pargraphs in either story.

Both of your stories are too poorly written to read. Could not get past the first couple paragraphs in either story.

This is a great character. Please write more episodes: two young women, a young woman and her mom, etc. I do agree that you could use a proofreader/editor, but don't let that slow you down. Thanks.

I'm not one to leave comments on stories, but WOW! I was looking forward to reading this due to the summary, but I couldn't get past the 2nd paragraph!!! I skimmed further and found that the aunt had "pasted" away!!! WHAT?

The change in writing tense was more than distracting, it was confusing. I never read this, but thought I should say that you should definitely keep writing - just don't post anything until you've checked it 5 times or more.