All Comments on 'Uncle of the Bride'

Funny, and with a real sense of the characters, despite being so short. Good job, great writing.

I hadn't realised just how sexy the ingredients wicked, touching, and clever can be when mixed up and stirred together in just the right way.

Bellisimo

At first, I thought the banter was a little trite, but as you went along, it picked up and made it that much more enjoyable.

I really liked the story, I must say. Flows neatly, with equal parts of the hot sex that I've come to know and love from Literotoica, with an actual readability.

Very nice. Bravo, good sir, bravo.

You are such a fun writer, always ready with the unexpected!

Ab