All Comments on 'Under A Raven's Eye'

a nice story, but could have cut out the 1st page altogether.......

be a bit more descriptive about the emotions.....and positions.....

perfect story to masturbate on!

Thoroughly enjoyed this story...hoping there will be a continuance to this with the significance of the stones and bird in it. ::fingers crossed:: Keep it up sugar.

Anonymous is right, this was a great story to masturbate to. This was a fabulous read, I'd also be interested in reading future chapters; no pressure. It's just that superb!

What an incredibly erotic story, told wonderfully!

Amelioration and admonishment don’t mean what you think they do. That’s just in the first few paragraphs. A good story spoiled by a writer attempting to appear sophisticated by using big words.