All Comments on 'Under the Waterfall'

I love the way you write both sex and dialog to seem so natural! It really makes your stories a joy to read!!

I like how you intertwined the memories with the action of the story. I like the use of the word "No" and I absolutely love your writing style! Keep up the great work!

You have the most beautiful way with words my friend. Bravo. Just lovely.

She could say No all she wants but I would have had to spread her asscheeks wide and suck and tongue fuck her asshole until she came again.