All Comments on 'Undercover Female'

hot story,nice twist...like the style of writing a lot

First Story. I wish you much luck as an author. If this is a sample of whats to come, I can't wait for more.

I enjoyed every bit of it.

Hope you keep writing. Kept my interest, that's for sure.

Great story! Great ending! Everything flowed well, smooth and well thought out. Please continue to share with us.

Wonderful story well written a five star effort.

Julie

If both she and the Major were undercover, what was gained by the pretense--except some good sex?

Maybe they found the buyers?

It is exciting to see them with a sheet just lightly tossed over them,naked. As to the story, 2 stars.

Very Nice