All Comments on 'Unexpected Change Ch. 03'

Great story , can't wait to read the rest of the story . Could possibly have more than four parts to this series . Again this is a great story.

Decent story. Maybe a 4.25 out of 5, I'd score it. I'd give it higher, but, it's very annoying when you can't stick to a name. Either call her Kay or Pale Feather, but quit switching from one to the other every other paragraph. I mean, on page two alone, you switched back and forth on her name five times. It's confusing, and quite annoying , truth be told.

Otherwise, it's quite an interesting story.

In part 1 I felt sorry for Maureen, still do.

The rape ruined it for me

I love how this story has evolve! Thank you. 5 BIG STARS!

Perhaps you could add a few more people to make this even more confusing. LOL I want more about the Coed naked shower time and applying lotion to each other.