All Comments on 'Unexpected Pleasure'

The elements of surprise and danger of being caught are hot. But why must there always be a husband? Let these women have a happy life together.

Really well written and so hot! It takes a lot of skill to write such a good story in short form. Great buildup, wonderful descriptions, and hot sex!

The story was beautifully executed catching the excitement of the moment within a short story that kept me excited with it's pace and content. You know when the writer can capture the essence of the moment when you feel it yourself.

Wow! This story left my heart racing and aching for more. It is so well written that the words made you feel like you were in the bathroom stall witnessing it all. My kudos to the author for such an amazing job

I don't understa why this isn't rated higher. It's seriously hot!

Okay. Wow. Seriously, girl, this is so good. Stylistically it's much better. You've developed and matured. This is seriously dripping and hot, well crafted. I liked the intensity of the quickie, the urgency, the dizzying, stupefying intensity of it all. Well done. I wonder what'll happen next...

This was really really good in my humble opinion.

I loved that you really gave an image of their chemistry which made the whole thing feel quite realistic.

Please write more (:

Good vibe but if you are telling a story in the first person you need to use the past tense otherwise it sounds more like a fantasy than something that actually happenED.

Wet panties and a wonderful orgasm. Thank you

The details are incredible. The description of the actions themselves made me really wet

I consider myself to be a fortunate male having opportunity to have had a relationship with a bi-girl and to witness such seductive relationships.

This situation is totally arousing and brought back some very pleasant memories. I have since married but would love for my wife to be surprised and experience such PLEASURE! Very well done! Thank you!