All Comments on 'Unexpected Threesome Ch. 09'

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NewnotsureNewnotsureover 6 years ago
Wow

This story line can go on longer love it.

bourbononicebourbononiceover 6 years ago
great story

Imagine ----- A guy with an average size cock that brings so much pleasure to 3 hot women. What's this world coming too. LOL

Paul (Bourbononice)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love it

Please keep the story alive, I love it

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ditto comments above.

I love this story. Please continue. Wow, indeed. Thanks for your efforts. In my experience, most women have findable G spots. Cowboy 100

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story!

Enjoy the build up and the plot. Sorry about the 1 vote - touchscreen took my vote and won't seem to let me change it. Would definitely give it a 5!

joder181joder181over 6 years ago
Hot

Well Joan you’ve done it again another erection inducing instalment, thanks for the post I loved it....

Cheers

M

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Distracting change to first person narrator

The previous chapters of this story have been very good, but the switch from 3rd person to 1st person narrator is odd and distracting.

I can’t understand why you’ve done it. The characterisation seems to have gone off with it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

'Ellen' is 25 and a quaified Doctor?

Sorry, not very likely even if she had qualified just last week!

With her experience on the other boat, she must be a least 26 or 27!

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I like writing about nice, even romantic, sex with nice people. In most cases my writing is inspired by people I have met and experiences I have had or watched others have. Sometimes the description of the person I include in my stories is almost recording a mental photograph...

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