All Comments on 'Unfathomable'

i know u rarely attempt multi- part stories..but, i think this guy deserves to find a love..even if not forever...

A standing ovation for love! You romantic, you. :0)

Tender. Sugar Daddies don't always have all the power.

Damn, nice twist there at the end!

Great story, hit all the erotic and emotional marks perfectly, and I gave it a top rating. I just wondered why Raul would feel the need to explain "Idomeneo" to a Met producer, of all people. Wouldn't he be more likely to assume that Cordell already knows the opera? I might suggest working that description into the narration for the reader's benefit, rather than putting it in the dialogue where it seems a bit gratuitous between two knowledgeable characters.

Very nice surprise ending.

I saw the ending coming when the opera situation happened. But the way he revealed it made it as good as the surprise would have been. You made me pity Cordell and want to see if he found love. Good story.

loved it sr...as always..just the right amount..

Love

*L*

a great and entertaining story. it was a great change of pace to the majority. the only contradiction i found was:

(He was my tutor, and my first love. And, I hope, my last love.")

(we've been together for three years now—and I plan for that to last forever.")

you write that the old man was his tutor and first love_ but you also write that they've only been 2gether for 3 years---which seems unlikely if the old man was his tutor and 1st love_ and why is he penniless if he was the tutor of a rich family?

so i don't get that