All Comments on 'Unfortunate'

by Ashson

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CruzinSuziCruzinSuziabout 9 years ago
Just Say No

Der! I wouldn't say a word for fear the fantasy would stop. All of your stories lead to what women want. men must always be careful of the NO, but if we say nothing g, part of us being the little bit of a victim makes us getting taken okay.

Assho, I can't tell you how many places I have been but there are hundreds of times and samples of ways and means I've wanted to be taken. I am afraid you may know too many of them and as a man bringin secrets of a woman to light I must say , NO.

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 9 years ago
You can write

when you're on form.

But you need to concentrate on quality.

Not quantity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Funny

This was so funny. I love the idea that she raped herself, just brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
New Smerna Beach FL

In the Mid 80's very similar to reality

DeborahCartierDeborahCartierabout 9 years ago
Exciting

Short but exciting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Bitch of a story it sucked (punn intended).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
My favorite author

you have raw talent my friend :)

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