by MSTarot
I just felt my head spin around so fast reading this I probably either fixed my back or need a chiropractor! It was at once very wrong and made me want to laugh at the same time! It must be a conatgion since...wow.
You get a 5 on this one. It was novel and different. Short...true, but I felt like I rolled in filth and washed in icewater and laughed about how it all happened. It's like one of those terrible things that happens to you but then in a month or so you can laugh about it with your buddies.
Sincerely, Payenbrant
I am unsure how to respond to this, like a car wreck it was hard to look away once I started the story. While hard to follow in some places, you always manage to keep me enthrall to the end with your style of writing.