All Comments on 'Unintended Consequences, Melissa'

That was a terrific story and I would have thought there would be lots of comments by now.

What more can I say?

Loved everything about this story! You are a very gifted writer! Thank you for sharing!

Beautifully written, although the "naturist" angle was unexpected. One quibble: it would have been nice to know what the class was about, just a short word or three in the first paragraph. (There were a few other minor quibbles, not worthy of further mention.) I liked the story, and found it to be well-presented from logic standpoints. It was delightful. As to future followup stories, you have definitely allowed yourself room to cover more territory with some of the other students, so there is potential.

-- KK in Texas

Nicely paced with interesting, enjoyable characters who aren't afraid to grab for what they want out of life. It's an uplifting read that leaves you pleased and happy at the end. Thank you, Scorpio44, for a fine story.

I always look for your stories and you don't let me down!!

excellant keep it up!

You have us spoiled!!! This is the kind of work we have come to expect out of you all of the time.

This story is a thing of beauty. I am disappointed that the score does not do it justice.

When I finnished this story, I was going to leave just one word as a comment. Thankyou. This story is well written and a truely great story, well worth the read, so again. Thankyou.

Fantastic story. Gave me a whole bunch of warm fuzzies.

Thanks for sharing

A 100 or more with some detail and surprises along the way.<P>

This could be your best - so far.<P>

Very Nice work Author. You are looked forward to.<P>

With Very High Regard<P>

Constructively - I realize you didn't want us to know their naked attributes which helped us focus more on the story but it was distracting not to know if he was 67.5 years old or 23.7.

You write such beautiful AND sexy stories. The characters are smart and thoughtful, and comfortable in their sexuality.

The romance is sensual and to be envied.

Thank you.

I loved your story. Your stories are so readable. Thanks, Boyd

You asked if we want more of this story, and my answer is YES! Enjoy your work, and absolutely love this story.

What more is there to say - really enjoyed.

Very nice work, both in content and in technique. However, is your main character really a professor? Not of English, I hope -- perhaps of sociology? Take a look at this specimen of his speech: I said, "By the way, no one is to open your envelope until everyone has their envelope. Opening them before everyone has theirs will get your grade lowered by five points." Unbelievable!

Another well written and interesting story, I look forward to more, as another comment said you have a lot of possibilities to carry this forward. I will look for more from you as I always do when scanning the days new stories

As the others have said, great story, great plot, and I look forward to more with these folks.

I also like peanut butter on my pancakes. Loved that tidbit.

As the others have said, great story, great plot, and I look forward to more with these folks.

I also like peanut butter on my pancakes. Loved that tidbit.

Sorry, I can't stand peanut butter, but I love pancakes. To Anonymous in MI, his age WAS in there. Now, for my criticism...oh, heck, there isn't any! Who cares about a typo or three when the story is this good? Please, keep the tale rolling along.

Loved the concept of the assignments set to the students - very imaginative but the best bit was at the nudist resort and the fun and friendship that happened there. A fine story and a damn good read. Loved it from beginning to end. Well done.

I've read a number of your stories and they've all been excellent. This one was particularly memorable. Thanks for posting.

When I first read this, I liked it a lot, but I found some things I hadn't liked much. One was how some things didn't quite seem to follow from the setup. I re-read it, wanting to point out some specifics. When I did, I found that the setup did indeed lead to the followup, it was just so subtle I had overlooked it.

The second time, I saw a lot of similarities to some Japanese fiction, where you really have to read between the lines and pay close attention to the dialog to realize that, e.g., the characters are falling madly in love, not just spending some time together as relatively distant acquaintances.

I've put this on my list to read again; I'm sure it will improve yet again. Now that I know you write some of your stories so subtly, I'll pay more attention.

I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY, AND THE CHARACTERS. PLEASE SIR MAY I HAVE SOME MORE!!!!!!

I intensely liked the plot, especially the surprises that were very gently hinted at several paragraphs before being made obvious. I very much liked the very professorial dialog in the classroom and office. I loved the teaching technique. (One thing I learned in classroom teaching is that none of my students ever learned anything when my mouth was open.)

I found this by accident when I came across pt. 2 and 3, went looking for it---one of the all-time best I have EVER read ! Can't wait to read the next chapters,

Thanks for the entertainment

Sam

having read other stories of yours I must say I enjoyed this one the best so far as I'm romantic at heart and your main charactors showed sex isn't the be all and end all but the slow continuation of romance of the heart

WELL DONE!!!!

And often the one you are least likely to risk damaging by filling it with the wrong person -

I DO enjoy how you write

Thank you for the story, excellent writing. This helps to pass the time on the night shift, fills in the bordem. Keep writing.

Cute and quick. Melissa really sounds like a beautiful woman inside and out.

you do it good :) Thanks again, GSM, I enjoyed this one too. The October/February relationship that went so suddenly to true love stretched my acceptance a little, but it was worth it to get to such a fine feeling finish. Bless you Scorps Lynn

That was an excellent story. I enjoyed having no knowledge of where it seemed to be going. It has gotten to the point that most stories on here you can predict. The only thing I could predict about this one was that Melissa and the professor would be the ones to get together.

Well-told, literate and satisfying, too.

HP

Great Love story. Very well written

you have a great start

are you going to add more to this

marriage, kids

Thanks this story made me smile and giggle

It has been a long time ago that I first read this. I realized part way through that I had read this before and enjoyed it every bit as much the second go around as the first. I have favorited this so that I don't lose track of it again.

I did enjoy the story. However, as an ex-teacher, the student-teacher relationship was a No-No. The nudist club did not bother me, BUT he should have waited till she finished his class before doing anything. The reasons that he gave to get around an ethics violation would still get him fired and loss of license.

Thank you for an interesting story. I know it doesn't sound like it, but I did enjoy the story.

The story was great,well-told, interesting and happy. The only thing saving the no-no problem is that her parents knew and approved. Another student in the class could still blow the whistle and the Professor is GONE, -- a really unintended result.

Thank you. tom anon

Instant-love with no build-up to make it convincing.

The talk of marriage after basically dating for less than a week is just cringeworthy.

I've read the story, but still have no idea what class he's teaching. It's probably one of the first things the reader should learn with how the beginning is structured, and not the only thing the author is being too vague about.

Another wonderful story and wish there was more.

One of your best!