All Comments on 'Unintentional Lolita Ch. 03'
by wordsinthedust
- 21 Comments
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI like where this is going - but you could move it along a bit more quickly, now. I'm ready, Kelly is certainly ready, It sounds like Mom is going to be OK with it - if not actually encouraging things, and it's going to be a whole lot of fun when Jessica gets home! On with the show!!
rafman188about 13 years agoI'm finding myself growing very fond of the 3 main characters and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope that the plot doesn't involve Billie gaetting hurt. Keep up the good work!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI AGREE WITH ONE OF THE REVIEWERS, I HOPE THE STORY LINE DON'T LEAD TO BILLIE GETTING HURT. OTHERWISE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, I HAVE ENJOYED THIS STORY VERY MUCH. THAT IS WHY HAD TO RATE THIS CHAPTER A 5 STAR
imharmless69about 13 years agoThis is a great story with perfect pacing. Keep up the good work.
imurddyabout 13 years agoI liked it, but it just takes so long to get the next chapter. It wouldn't be so bad if there were more meat to the chapters. Its like torture.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoLove the story wife and I are waiting for the next chapter.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThese are great and we're all waiting for the next one.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoTHIS IS UNDOUBTEDLY THE MOST EROTIC LOVE STORY THAT I HAVE READ IN A VERY LONG TIME..IN READING YOUR LAST CHAPTER I THOUGH THAT WHEN HE RETURNS HOME (FROM FRI.PARTY) A LITTLE INEBRIATED &, CRAWLS INTO BED, ONLY TO FIND ITS NOT HIS WIFE HES KISSING & CARESSING.DADDY WILL, ALONG WITH ALL OF YOUR HOT STORY FOLLOWERS REALIZE THAT MOMMY IS IN FAVOR OF HIS RELATIONSHIP WITH THEIR DAUGHTER... YES LIKE EVERYONE ELSE IM LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE CHAPTERS..
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoFar and away the most erotic stories I have read.
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI am waiting with baited breath on the next chaptermany Thanks for the time taken to write
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoAwesome story...the best I've read on here. Keep it going !
bravomenaover 12 years agoA great story with a very good pace, enjoying it in the length of the word.
Keep writing please
And Thank you for sharing
toolbox0over 12 years agoI'm quite impressed with this story overall. realistic, well paced, and, generally well thought out.
m1k3about 11 years agoThis and the last episode were great, but the formatting seems to have gotten a bit mixed up (no line breaks between paragraphs). Well, anyhow, I enjoy all of your writing, and I am slowly reading through your archives. Keep writing definitely!
