All Comments on 'Unwritten'

I loved this story, I especially loved the pace. You've got so many avenues for advancement with this story, so many different erotic elements to explore. I hope you continue with it!

"Felicity began her Tradition of Service right then and there.

THE END....."

you sure Jukebox? that read me like the 1st chapter of what could be a really super series.

Very erotic and stimulating for phantasy. I think this should become a wonderful multiple chapter story.

Well written, very well paced, Very, very erotic. I wholeheartedly agree with the other comments_ that is unless of course we readers simply need to learn the 'Tradition of Restraint' and in that case_

you have to continue with this..plz?!!

Tell me that there is another chapter. And another, and another. I usually skim through the stories. I read this one all the way through!!! It had all of the elements I enjoy in an erotic piece. Please continue "Unwritten" Please?!?

Wow! This is some story and made me so wet! I think I might to audit a few classes.