All Comments on 'Up on the Hillside with Amber'

This is by far the best story I have ever read on here. Just perfect, I was dripping wet and came several times by the end. Thank you!

A good tale, but...

If you truly wish to improve your stories, write in past tense. Nothing sounds more amateurish and awkward than present tense.

with rapierwit!

Don't attempt to write Present' tense.

Apart from anything else you'll keep slipping into 'Past' tense and back again.

Stick to 'Past' tense.

It's so good to read a story with English written as it should be. Liked the story and characters especially the ending. I could easily relate to this tale, being a northern lad myself. Open air sex is the best. Keep up the good work.

Damm, that was soo good. Loved the build-up ! And the finish. LOVED IT al the way through.

I could really get into the characters, and the place and the time . . . the ending was a great twist of the tale . . . I wonder if anything is going to happen after 1996!

I have such h a bad one I can't remember if I have read this tale before but your story telling is so good it doesn't matter whether I have or not. The language you use the attitudes you embrace are so of the time it's almost like taking a return trip.