All Comments on 'Upon a Savage Shore Ch. 15'

Awesome work as usual, cant wait for the next installment!

Another great chapter to add to a remarkable story. Thank you for sharing with us.

You tell a great story! Please continue to post chapters. Waiting for the next....

Keep up the great work

Fantastic new chapter, really loving this story. Keep up the amazing work my friend.

Yours is the only story I've read that leaves me anxious for the next chapter. I usually wait for the last chapter to begin reading to make sure the story is complete. I can't do that with you.

Keep it up and thanks.

I would abuse the shit out of it if I had the ability.

Priority One?

Getting Lit. updates faster. ADD MAKES WAITING FOR GOOD THINGS EVEN MORE AGONIZING THAN YOU'D BELIEVE.

Was getting worried that you had a problem that would make this a good but dead story. Then you throw a winger and bring out a three sigment chapter......! Nice..!

Will be waiting for more like this.. please keep it coming... MORE MORE>>>!

Ghost.

Please keep the story going. He needs to bed all of them soon,

You heard M'pel E'kmel, Sergeant! Stop pussyfooting around!

...but I also want rover to get lucky now? Poor guy.

anticipating the next chapter

This is,as of today,the on-going story i like the most in this whole site.I'm really anticipating the moment Liam takes the commander and they become a happy family. I know it's been said that they can not have kids... but the number of times it's been explicitly stated still makes me hope they'll get a surprise in that aspect.

For me,in stories with a romantic note,the only thing better than a happy ending is a happy ending with children

maybe an alien orgy is coming soon? with all three? we can only hope...lol...

Would love to see the Comic book version of this story!?...

Then children? I'm tired so I'm jumping ahead, but I hope it's where it leads - especially since it seems that you are dropping hints.

I wonder if the Cdr. has tech with her to make it possible (under proper circumstances) which would be the final straw to seal the deal?

Really glad I'm going to get to find out what your plans are, and confident that I'll enjoy them regardless :)

Jason

After reading a lot of stories and putting it off for a long time I have finally made an account. It was you, you and your infernally good story that convinced me to finally make an account. DAMN YOU!!!

But seriously, love this story. I agree with many of you other fans and think it could be published, and of course we'd want to iron out some mistakes and maybe let your brilliance touch it a few more times if you did it but this is really good stuff. Better than many published novels I've read. I'd even be willing to help with editing though I have no experience save being extremely literate.

Cheers!!

DJ

Sure, I might read this and think "duh", since it does seem pretty logical.

But honestly I don't think I'd be able to figure some of this stuff out - and that's pretending I was a quarter as capable as a warrior/leader as Liam is.

He's very lucky to have an older, wiser woman - who is still HOT, and interested in him - giving him excellent counsel not just on how to be a better leader, but also a better husband.

ENVY=ME

:)

J

Love it!

Something that I've always known is just what the commander said, "females often wear garments to enhance their appearance". That's why Victoria still has a Secret, lol. A woman in panties or lingerie is usually more alluring than one completely nude. Kind of lets the imagination have some fun. I'm still betting the parachute from the pod will be made into something sexy for Tem'Ma'tel to wear :)