by nerd4music
Quite well written. Waiting breathlessly for the next chapter. Am sure you won't disappoint. Harlow actually had a hissy fit? Can't get that thought out of my mind. Great job!
Oh my god !!! ... I just saw this story and OMG ! .. I was really sad when i got the last chapter. Please write more soon .. And make it 10 pages : )) Lol .... Btw I really love your writing and read all of your old stories . Just keep writing . Thanks
Can't believe how much I missed this story. I guess we are going next to some future year where they meet again! At least, I hope.
This is amazing! Angry Nate is incredible. I can't believe he kissed her and then did that. Wow! I can't wait for more!
.....that you continued the story. I am so hooked on this story and you are a great writer. Excellent update, I am patiently waiting for the next chapter and it better not take too long!! LOL!!
need a good kick in the ass! Loved the way you ended this chapter lol. But, hurry soon with a new one!!!
Now that's a harsh good bye! Thanks for the chapter, I'm anxious for the next one.
Why? Why oh why must we ladies push away men who bare themselves to us? Dammit!
That was a harsh way to say goodbye, but in this case Nate is justified. I really wished she didn't push him away especially since he told her how he felt. I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens.
That was my first thought afterreading this chapter and the way that their relationship ended was just nasty. Why do woman think they can play a sex game better than a man....it seems we always lose. I feel bad for both of them because they like each other. Why is she the way that she is...I understand Nate is like this because of the woman that his father dated but what is Jaime's story? Great story looking forward to reading the next update. Thanks
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and so bittersweet. Loving all the angst and drama, and how we got a little peek of the real Nate Harlow. I can't wait to see what happens next!
he was totally justified in his actions, what is she scared of? Love this update! Please update soon, I want to see what happens next!
I NEED MORE!
this was so hot and the bittersweat goodbye was perfect. You need to update! I don't think I'll be able to sustain a long wait!!!!!!!!!!!
My heart is aching author, you have an amazing talent!
This chapter had my emotions going crazy. You're a great writer.