All Comments on 'Valentine's Day Game'

and tie that girl down! Good hot sex, just what's wanted for Valentine's Day (and every day)! Bethy, you delivered the goods.

The sex was hot enough, although I prefer it a little more down and dirty, and I don't really care that much for writing in the present tense. A good effort, all in all.

A good story although I didn't like the tense the story was written.