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by Dale Jane Henparty

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Dale Jane HenpartyDale Jane Henpartyover 5 years agoAuthor
My confession (The author)

As the author, I apologize for the errors in the mechanics of this story. I had edited it and just posted the rough draft by mistake. I will submit the edited copy now.

prinnaveaprinnaveaover 5 years ago
Edited or Draft

Like the story and will rate it as soon as You confirm the edited one.

I was giving this one 4* anyway

Richie4110Richie4110over 5 years ago
Thanks

Could be a good story with a little work.

Dale Jane HenpartyDale Jane Henpartyover 5 years agoAuthor
Edited now

The story is now edited.

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I am a ‘Mature,’ by Literotica’s definition; I am living with a nasty thinking writer captured inside of me. The writer is mentally female and can create straight and special stories. She was named ‘Dale Jane Hen-Party’ by my family for three seasons when I was twelve years o...