All Comments on 'Valentine's Day Surprise'

The characters and their problems felt realistic.. how they addressed the problem felt like fantasy. A really good mix. And you managed to get a Valentines story posted on Valentines. Nice work. Thanks.

What a dream, 2 girls and one boy and the wife is willing like an idiot!

Elaine sure over came some internal problems with the help of Donna and Lisa. It’s hard to believe that Elaine was willing to let Donna have her husband so easily. The “new” life that they are moving towards looks to be very exciting and could also include Donna as they explore new boundaries.

I will provide this story to my Wife - Maybe....

Great Valentine Day story. But I question if it would be a 1 off, or if was going to be an ongoing thing. Well done, I can see where this could have more chapters,

I think it was a poor assumption that he would want another woman involved. He clearly only wanted her. Love forgives… it doesn’t bring another woman into the bedroom to say sorry.

I really liked this story.

Many questions left unanswered... 2nd wife? What does her family think? One combined household? Can they make a relationship without Jealousy and hierarchy?... 2nd chapter? Thank you.