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All Comments on 'Valentine's Kiss'

by junglejim43

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TheCheshireCatTheCheshireCatabout 20 years ago
Grammatical disaster

The text rambled incoherently and crucial points of the plot were muddled due to a lack of clear sentence sructure.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Don't get it

Makes utterly no sense to me

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Un-bleeding believable.

It just not ring faintly true.

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