by Samuelx
STOP!!!!! Understand, no one reads this shit. We just skip and comment trying to convince you, find mental help, you really need it.
Again, this felt like it could have been an entire book. Put some time and love into these 'posts' (can't even truly call it a story), instead of just posting summaries of ideas.
Like, rather than a six part series, these are short summaries of six book ideas that are only loosely related. I get that you are 'living by your own rules' but it feels like you're not even trying to improve as a writer. You're just nonstop cranking out ideas you have, and it seems as if you're not putting any effort into any of your ideas.