All Comments on 'Vanessa and Veronica Ch. 01'

Most of this chapter was such an emotional ride. It really gave so much info about

where this family's story went after 'Ethan".

There was one sentence that really threw pff my comprehension on page 2 -

"Victoria was the first of the girls to come down for breakfast" - it should be Veronica.

Rik and Luc really did lighten up the heavy, emotional mood of this informative chapter. Those 2 seems like they will be fun. I can't wait to see how they stir up everything in the Sinclaire family's life.

Thanks as usual for another great story. You are such a gem of a writer!!!!

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I got my V's mixed up! I thought I caught them all sorry about that!

Very nice....very nice indeed. We have a shift on the Sinclair track and it looks extremely promising. The daughters, smart and no doubt beautiful, will give an added dimension to this very compelling saga of a dynastic family.

Oh my!!!! SO looking forward. Bringing in "fresh" blood is just perfect and if I'm reading right; they are vamps too; possiblity one for each sister?

Can Not wait to read on!!!!

Really glad to read about the twins and what happens with them.

SO ALL I CAN SAY IS WAY TO GO GIRL I JUST LOVE IT IM ALREADY WAITING ON THE NEXT FEW PAGES THAT I KNOW THAT U R WRITING AS IM TYPING U THIS MASSAGE SO DON'T KEEP US WAITING . BY THE WAY HOWS ABOUT GIVING US A LILTTLE BIT MORE ON THE WOVLES STOREY I KNOW THAT ITS FINISH BUT WHAT ABOUT HER SISTER HUMMMMMMMMMMM THINK ABOUT IT.

I love how u developed the different stories of the Sinclair family! Again these stories should be published as novels or erotic novel!

Keep up the Excellent work Kala!

Peace, Ms Sadi

Oh Great... I knew I should NOT have checked if there was an update... Now I'm late for work.... Oh well....

Great Story... and ooohhhh... fresh meat in the story too? Damn you are a great writer, we cant wait and see where this is going.... and How do you keep it all straight with all your stories going on?

I love this story. It has started very well and I look forward to reading more.

5 stars!!!

this blowS!! lol...KIDDING

Excellent start; however do be careful, a couple of times you said Victoria when you meant to refer to either veronica or vanessa.

P.s french dudes...really?? awww is it too late to make them Irish or Italian?????

Mariasmd I so wish Irish but, hey it's a damn good story. Look at the frenchman Oliver Martinez.... Yumm..lmao I can't wait for the next chapter

Goodie another vampire story, what happened to Kevyn? From Patrick story I thought that the twins were still 18 when they started working with him Luk and Rik are sexy, me likey!!!

The twins were 18 when they were told about their conception and then the story jumps forward 10 yrs

great start to your new installment to your ongoing vampire saga. I have enjoyed everyone of your stories and can not wait to find out about the twins

You are truly a gifted and talented writer and I would like to thank you for the many hours of entertainment you have provided for me and I look forward to many more hours of reading your wonderful stories.

'NUFF SAID......

Ronnie & Nessa are all grown up now. We've got to stop calling them "the girls." lol

I can't wait to see how you pair them up with Luc and Rik, who seem to be as lively and opposites as the twins. And yes, I don't usually find French men appealing; but I'll channel Olivier Martinez, too... time two. lol

Kal, you've renewed my interest in vampires. I can't wait to read more of this latest story of your vampire series.

Great stuff, as usual!!

~Bluegardenia

Now the twins are having their own story too this is just great looking forward to see what will happen with them. Am also looking forward to continue to see what happens in Patrick story as well so please update them real soon thanks!!

This is going to be so interesting

Yay. Daddy's going to have fit that his girls are all grown up.

I'm so glad you did a story about Vanessa and Veronica. Great start so far. Rik seems like a good guy. He just needs to losen up a little. But Luc seems like he could be trouble. I can see Ethan,Patricke and Martin having to wup his ass for breaking one of the twins hearts. lol

Well, if Ethan and Katrina are suffering from empty nest syndrome, maybe they should work on filling the nest up again!

More, Please!

I just finished reading Ethan and loved it. BUT the girls were told about how their parents met when they were 16yrs and not 18. Lol! Still a good read.

I know and I had it at 16 but it got rejected because the robot saw the age and thought that there was underage sex so I had to change their ages to 18

Just when I got sad than Ethan was over I found the other stories... So I am starting with this one LOL... Cant wait to see what happens. Thanks for continuing the saga.