All Comments on 'Vanessa and Veronica Ch. 02'

excellent chapter looking forward to see how this great tale develops please post again as soon as you can

i'm literally BEGGING u, PLEEAASE let 1 of them meet their mate & have a normal bonding. wud LOVE 2 see how that happens w/o the extra(a lil is good) drama. or is the whole Sinclaire blood line screwed up? i'm still gonna read em, just thot i'd ask :o)

Noooo, don't stop there! I'm really enjoying your stories. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Kal, I love just about everything u write.

Great Update(:

keep them coming i cant wait to read the next chapter

dont stop now

WTF GURL U Hve me waiting for this chapter n this is all we get?

Great teaser!!! Can't wait to read about the twins meeting face to face!!!

Sweet Vanessa deserves better than a man-whore like Luc for her mate. I hope Rik is wrong and some other guy comes into this story for Nessa, maybe some human subject they use for the brain scan, then you could explore a human male mating a female vampire (I know I'm grasping at straws here, but it bugs me that a slut like Luc will get a great girl and she'll have to settle).

i love the way you write. :)

Love this next segment of the Sinclair family saga.

Can't wait to see little Miss Hardnose come face to face with her mate.

Vanessa is more open to meeting her mate. Interesting that Luc is like Ronnie and Rik is more like Nessa.

Let the games begin.

I just hope that the twins don't end up studying male vampire rape from a personal point of view!

That Victoria ends up being Luc's mate instead of Vanessa. That would be a hoot!!!

Great update but your killing me with the cliffhanger. Please update soon.

"Victoria stopped dead in her tracks..." Did you mean Veronica? Sometimes it's difficult to keep track of who's who. How old is Victoria (little sister) in this chapter?

I did mean Veronica, sorry.... I was thinking about Victoria at the time ( I was thinking about when I was gong to have her visit) and by the way Victoria is ten.