All Comments on 'Vanessa and Veronica Ch. 06'

Who the heck is this jerk? 5 stars.

Quiet mahogany storm

And why does he particularly dislike Vanessa? He must know them in some way to know the difference between the twins.

just a few words i could think of to describe this chapter i think someone is in for an ass whipping can we start taking bets on who is going to get to the mystery man first?

excellent chapter i can not wait for the next chapter

Could this guy be a family member of one of the women raped by Ethan or possibly one of the other brother. Although it does not explain the Vanessa component???? I am awaiting your writing brilliance to lift the fog so that I and others may see clearly. 5 stars!!!!

good update as always.You haven't updated patrick.

10 stars for this double sex whammy.

a FIGHT!!!!!! Great update as usual. Thanks for sharing. :D

I'd love to know who this person is who thinks they can cross the Sinclaires and get away with it??? Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Life is never a dull moment with any of the Sinclaires. The crazy thing is he has to deal with two other Vampires and he doesn't I don't think want to deal with them. Why was it so important to see Vanessa's response? Who is this man and what is his real issue? I can't wait for the show down and it's nice that he realized he needed to settle his affairs because he is going to die... ha ha

clifhanger!!!!! really? let the wait begin :)

wow this is so about to get ugly

I cant wait to read more!!! Its getting good so please don't keep us waiting to read the next chapter.

interesting...who is this man.

I have a feeling that he might go after victoria and i can't wait to find out who this guy is

Who is this bitch coward and what is his beef with the Sinclair clan? He is right on knowing anyone of them he screws with is a death sentence.

It is the hope that he will leave sweet Vickie alone. I am guessing mr. punk ass won't have the balls to go after the adults though. Don't let the baby suffer........please.......please.

This guy is the mate to one of the girls raped by one of the brothers, isn't he? I can tell by the words he was speaking and he is willing to die since he knows whichever one of the Sinclaire women he hurts/kills will cause him to lose his life and he doesn't care! He sounds like a desperate man that has nothing to lose!

An "A" for story. A "D-" for composition! "You really need an editor."

You need to shut up and go stand in the corner, literotica would have not allow this story to be posted if their a problem with grammar. Keep your silly and rude comment in your head and yes it's a wonderful story. The author and readers do not need to hear from a person with no talent. Try writing a story and post it here.