All Comments on 'Vanessa's Dissonance Ch. 01'

She is enjoying herself, and volunteered for it. The grammar is good for an English as second language writer, and the story isn't even close to be finished.

I came twice just reading this...fantastic!

~happy horny 22 yr/o f

Amazing - I've just come twice reading this. Amazing.

good stuff!

Its not really what I'm into, the whole girl with huge tits whoring herself out because she is in a desperate situation. It's a very common type of sexual fantasies. This story has potentially though for next few chapters. For your first time writing it is good.

I want that done to me I love swallow cum I just had a.couple mouth fills tonight and more running out of my manpussy yum yum c slut

Bringing out that inner slut, it just takes the proper motivation! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your