All Comments on 'Vanishing Act'

One of your best in a while!

Curiosity gets the best of us all sometimes. Quite a story, thanks for sharing it with us.

It would be kind of interesting to see a story about a hypnotist who's actually lost control—not in a mental "mind control" sense, but in an addiction sense. Someone whose entire life crumbles around them while they struggle to manage a huge number of consorts. Basically, a hypnotist who's not actually that competent. Be a neat "careful what you wish for" story.

I say this because I actually thought it was where you were going originally. It is interesting to see a hypnotist who's clearly not making the "wisest" choices. Some good characters here, and the premise is really clever.

I like this story, though the sex scene felt weirdly rushed. But it's not always about the sex with your stories, and that's what makes them so interesting.