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PhiroEpsilonPhiroEpsilonabout 6 years ago
Steampunk! That's a new one for you

I like the story.

wiscman45wiscman45about 6 years ago
Very interesting

The story is well written and interesting. I could see this as a horror film with the ghostly spirit of the doctor in the London fog after it could no longer return to his body with the destruction of the generator. Each night as the fog descends on London people feel the ghastly presents of Dr. Sabastian. He can touch their minds but not control others without the machines help. He invokes nightmares now instead of anything else.

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