by Husband_of_Hottie
yeah 100%bs
who is going to let a guy drop his drawers in fron of his wife UNLESS it was agreed upon
than your writing style sucked
plus all asians have slanted pussies to match their eyes
I give you a 2 for the hot wife description. Leave the husband out of next story. Try a nonconsent theme with her being taken by someone. Perhaps the brother or father in law,
anyone but the wimp husband. Always more exciting to read about a chase and capture then a sacrifice.
So, you are not an acclaimed author... Big deal... I liked your story. It was rough and ready. Looking forward to next chapter.
So where is chapter 2? It promises to be even better.