All Comments on 'Velma Goes to Work'

...for regurgitating this piece of trash almost as if you'd read the last few reviews....

Bob knows how to write some gross weird stories. Sometimes they are a little over the top like this one, but I'll have to hand it to him, the dude sure writes a lot of stories.

Thanks Bob. Not quite my cup of tea, but I appreciate the effort.

Your testes Bob just when was it that you lost them?

I really liked the story, very erotic. Eating a cream pie is a common theme and in fiction it's fine.

Loved it hubbie gets the best of two worlds.

I like your retribution stories better than the willing cuck stories. This tale, while well written, definitely did not float my boat. It sank like a stone.

the husband has turned into a pimp, living off the whoring wife. no AIDS/STD in paradise

. . . a nice new truck, and the bills are getting paid. No wonder he has a grin on his face even though it's there permanently with a little crust. Okay, it isn't Hemingway, certainly not Shakespeare although the bard was a lusty rapper at times, it must be the leader of the church of the subgenius; Praise Bob!!!

It was a short fun story and that's okay.

the old English meaning for a clock-old.

a man who can not satify his lady sexually.

who then get tared and fathered in chicken feathers, if he complains, that she has sex with another man.

old saxon.

so the real defination of a clokold is some one that complains about there woman cheating on them, as they clearly can not satisfy her.

even so this story to me was not my cup of tea. as such 1 star.

reasons..

i dislike the modern meaning of a cluck-old, in story's.

i prefer male domination.

or

Delmer that leaves you hanging on the edge to see which path they take.

he did not cop out or wimped out he was clearly into shearing his wife. to me that odd. unless it an open relationship.

fine, to me that just pointless. open mirages from the get go fine. anythign else other than an open honest relation ship is.. mis trust. to me that why i find these cluck story's to be... lame. she dont trust him or respect him she may love him, but to me there can not be a relationship without respect, trust, openness & love. 1 out of 4 = a failed relationship..

she make him eat out her marks cum. no respect.

she did not tell him about the side job. no trust, or openness

the cash in the account is not an issue. it's common to have separate accosts for your own personal spending.

a one way relation ship to me, is to me, not what i call a fair deal. as such she was trash. she hookered for a car for him. a car they clearly did not need. and so there was no point to it??? so she had to have an other reason thrill and excitement.. so she hookered because she could, and felt the thrill was worth it. the car was a bribe. more a guilty here a one off prezcent for all the crempies.

to me it was test. do you wish to be kept man or are you into a fair relation ship. if yoru into fair relation ship's then yoru lookignto what i did ot get that car and act on it. if not your just my pet toy..

persoanly i cant see why or nay motive on her part for doign hwat she did to him and still marrying him other then beigna sucker.

Wouldn't fetish be more appropriate, considering how he gets off on eating creampies? Well-written but not erotic. The money for that truck would have been better spent paying off part of the mortgage on their house. Maybe hubby should get some strange and then let her taste it on his cock, or smell the perfume (of another) on his collar, or maybe kiss her and let her taste another woman's pussy on his lips. Do you suppose his wife would turn the other cheek to something like that?

If the topic offends you. It's a story. I will never understand why anyone reads a story on a topic they don't like. I don't read any of the Gay or BDSM stuff simply because it's not for me. Keep writing. I enjoyed it

A popular local song goes "IF when you come home, the fridge is full of food, all the bills have been paid, and your wife is happy, then why bother the other man?" Forward thinking and I notice a lot of your stores before were of revenge now they have turned and are "if I am befitting from my wife's indiscretions then why stop a good thing?"

It would be nice if you could give Velma's side of the picture. How she felt when the extras started. Keep up the good work.

I wonder if the guy could see around the new truck and understand that his cheating slut wife was exposing him to every disease known to man? Is the truck and having a slut for a wife worth risking your life? I think not. And how stupid does she think he is? She assumes he doesn't know he's eating other men's leavings? She doesn't think he knows that her tips wouldn't even make the down payment on the truck? I don't know what bothers me more - the fact that she's cheating on him or the fact that she thinks he's a dumbass. Another JPB disaster.

really what a fag

ANOTHER PATHETIC ASSHOLE WHO GETS OFF FUCKING HIS WIFE WITH ANOTHER MANS CUM DRIPPING OUT OF HER CUNT....NO DOUBT THE CREW CAB WAS MORE IMPORTANT TO HIM THAN HIS WIFE BEING A PROSTITUTE...HOPE HE REMEMBERS TO GO GET A CHECK UP FOR THE CLAP AND AID's....WHAT A PITIFUL STORY...JUST MORE OF YOUR DIRE SHITE RAMBLINGS....

Another ridicules comment from the asshole of LIT! dear Annony. HEY! ANNONY!!! You retard!!! Yelling won't help get your insane comment across. Why not try fishing in the North Atlantic w/o a life vest. As Buggs Bunny would say: " What a buffoon!"

Can't drive that new truck after getting AIDS

how many times have you been to a bar that you have wondered just what goes on...If you have not then you are not a looking... maybe not the money in the bank accounts but the action in and around the bar is much the same... Just a saying 5

Lets face it any one that don't know cum from a wet pussy is dead. Wife doesn't know that, she is telling her pussy eating husband she is cheating. I can eat my wife out after I cum in her pussy but no fu&%king way not my cum. I do read and enjoy the stories. I think some were in this country a lot of the stories are possible and happen.

He wants to trade a new truck for his life? Because his wife's pussy is a festering cesspool of diseases. No way to drain that swamp or stop her from passing nasty things along to hubby. This story just made my skin crawl. Bad Bob, REALLY bad!

I gave it a four just because it’s you. But eating a creme pie nearly every night just to get some pussy and a truck is a little over the top.

yep another cheating wife and a stupid hubby that does not have any balls so stupid just keep the bitch

of a softball team in San Diego years ago---NO BALLS AT ALL....all female team in a co-ed league----

JPB tells it like it is.

Not as bad as a lot of JPB stuff, but not very good either.

I'd love to have the slut bringing me home all those yummy creampies

Whore because she is getting paid to fuck, Now if the owner doesn't want the husband there when the wife was "Working" would automatically ring a bell with me. I would just turn up in a disguise, and maybe spend some of my wife's earnings on one of the other available ladies.

Great fun until the STDs kick in. Disgusting.

Guessed in beginning but unprepared for wife feeding him all those other men's cum. Totally disgusted with JPB's view of the world, and buying the truck in no way cancels the horrendous behavior. A real man would have taken the money and paid to have her boss fucked up followed by a reveal of pics of all the men going to club resulting in it being shut down.

Spelling and grammar so bad I could not get into the story. I got about half way down the page before giving up on it. Glad I didn't continue from what I read in the comments. I find it revolting that these closeted gay authors want to relate their fantasies of sucking cock and swallowing another man's cum

What story? Just a pimp and whore wife !!!!